Fine Intro Tab

Hi, this is my attempt of the intro/main riff. The tuning is either standard or drop D, 
don't really care because the intro doesn't play the low e string. Anyways, there is 
sort harmony with another guitar but I only have one of them. This is my first 
tab so... PLEASE RATEEE!!!!
[ Tab from: http://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/m/minus_the_bear/fine_intro_tab.html ]
e---------------------------------------------|
B---------------------------------------------|
G----7h9-------7h9-11~------------------------|
D-9-9---9-9-9-9---9---------------------------|
A---------------------------------------------|
E---------------------------------------------|


e---------------------------------------------|
B---------------------------------------------|
G----7h9-------7h9-11-11~---------------------|
D-9-9---9-9-9-9---9--9------------------------|
A---------------------------------------------|
E---------------------------------------------|