Prequel To The Sequel Tab

Here is my intro tab, if it sounds wrong turn on overdrive to 8.
Listen to song for timing

Drop C#
[ Tab from: http://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/b/between_the_buried_and_me/prequel_to_the_sequel_tab.html ]
C#|------------------------------11h12p11-----------------------|
G#|----------------------9-10-12----------12--------------------|
 E|--------------------9---------------------11/9---------------|
 B|-9---9-9-9-9-9-9--9------------------------------------------|
F#|-7---7-7-7-6-6-7---------------------------------------------|
C#|-------------------------------------------------------------|


C#|------------------------------9h10p9-------------------------|
G#|----------------------7-8-10-----------10--------------------|
 E|--------------------7----------------------9/7---------------|
 B|-7---7-7-7-7-7-7--7------------------------------------------|
F#|-5---5-5-5-4-4-5---------------------------------------------|
C#|-------------------------------------------------------------|

I will see what you guys think, than tab the rest.