Condemned Intro Tab

This is my first tab, let me know if anything is wrong.  Ill try and get the rest of the 
up soon.

D#|--------------------------------------------------|
A#|--------------------------------------------------|
F#|--------------------------------------------------|
C#|-----------------------------------------33333----|
G#|-----5-5----6--------5-----------6-3-5---33333----|
C#|--0-0----6-3-6-3-5-2---0-0-0-0-0---------33333-3*-|
PM|  . .    . . . . . .   . . . . .
[ Tab from: http://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/a/as_i_lay_dying/condemned_intro_tab.html ]
D#|---------------------------------------------------|
A#|---------------------------------------------------|
F#|---------------------------------------------------|
C#|------------------------------------------33333----|
G#|-----5-5----6p5--------5-----------6-3-5--33333----|
C#|--0-0----6-3---6-3-5-2---0-0-0-0-0--------33333-3*-|
PM|  . .    . .   . . . .   . . . . .

D#|-------|
A#|-------|
F#|-------|
C#|--0~~~~|
G#|--0~~~~|
C#|--0~~~~|


*=pinch harmonics
~~=let note ring
.=palm mute