Teenage Suicide Tab

This is my first tab, so if it sucks, my bad
Main Intro: (Standard Tuning)
E----------------------------------
B----------------------------------
G----------------------------------
D----------9-9-9-7-9-9-9-7- REPEAT
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Second Part:
E----------------------------------
B----------------------------------
G----------------------------------
D---------10-9-7-7^9^7-5 -hold-----
then
d----------7-7^9-5------repeat a couple of times

enjoy.