In The Midst Of Lions - Herods Demise Chords & Tabs

Ok, This is my first tab ever, and it may not be 100% correct. Be easy with the criticism please.

Herod's Demise
By:In The Midst Of Lions

Drop C tuning

Intro/Guitar 1:
D|---------------------|      
A|---------------------|      
F|--------8---------7--| x4   
C|--5---5-----4~--4----|      
G|----6-----6---5------|      
C|---------------------|      

Guitar 1
|---------------------------------|      
|---------------------------------|      
|--------8---------7-------8------| with tremolo effect
|--5---5-----4~--4---5---5-----4~-|      
|----6-----6---5-------6-----6----|      
|---------------------------------|
|
|Guitar 2
|-----------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------|
|-0----0-0--0--0-0-0---0----0-0--0--0-0-0-------|
|-0-2b-0-0--0--0-0-0---0-2b-0-0--0--0-0-0-------|
  .    . .  .  . . .   .    . .  .  . . .

Both Guitars
|------------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------------|
|-0----0-0--0--0-0-0---0--0-0--0--0-0-0-0--0-----|
|-0-2b-0-0--0--0-0-0---0--0-0--0--0-0-0-0--0-2b--|
  .    . .  .  . . .   .  . .  .  . . . .  .

Verse:
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|  x2
|-0-0--0--0-0-0--0--0-0--0--0-0-0-0--0------|
|-0-0--0--0-0-0--0--0-0--0--0-0-0-0--0-2b---|
  . .  .  . . .  .  . .  .  . . . .  .

Guitar 1
|------------------------------------------------11h15p11-----|
|----------------------------------------------13--------13---|
|----------------15-13-12h13p12--------------12------------12-|
|-5---5-6/9-8~------------------13-12~-----13-----------------|  
|---6------------------------------------15-------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------|
|
|Guitar 2 keep repeating Verse

Guitar 1
|----------------17-15-14h15p14------------------15h19p15-----|
|-------------------------------15-14~---------17--------17---|
|--------------------------------------------16------------16-|
|-5---5-6/9-8~-----------------------------17-----------------|  
|---6------------------------------------19-------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------|
|
|Guitar 2 keep repeating Verse

Guitar 1
|------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------|
|----------------15-13-12h13p12------------|
|-5---5-6/9-8~------------------13-12~-----|  
|---6--------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------|
|
|Guitar 2 keep repeating Verse
[ Tab from: https://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/i/in_the_midst_of_lions/herods_demise_tab.html ]
Both Guitars
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|  
|-1-1--1--1-1-1--1--1-1--1--1-1-1-1--1------|
|-0-0--0--0-0-0--0--0-0--0--0-0-0-0--0-2b---|
  . .  .  . . .  .  . .  .  . . . .  .

Both Guitars
|-----------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------|
|---------------------------------------7h8p7---------------------|
|-----------------------4'-------------------8-10-8-7-7h8p7----7*-|  x4
|-3'-----------5'-----5'--3'--------------------------------10----|
|----200200200----200--------200200200----------------------------|
      .. .. ..     ..         .. .. ..

|------------------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------------------|
|-7----------7-----8-----5-----5-----7-----11-11-------|
|-x----------x-----x-----x-----x-----x-----x--x--------|  
|-5----------5-----6-----3-----3-----5-----9--9--------|
|---0000-000---000---000---000---000---000-------------|
    .... ...   ...   ...   ...   ...   ...

|------------------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------------------|
|-7----------7-----8-----14-14\13-13/16-16\14-14--11~--|
|-x----------x-----x-----x--x-\x--x-/x--x-\x--x---x-~--|  
|-5----------5-----6-----12-12\11-11/14-14\12-12--9-~--|
|---0000-000---000---000-------------------------------|
    .... ...   ...   ...

Breakdown:
|------------------------------|
|------------------------------|
|------------------------------|
|------------------------------|  x2
|-0--0-0--0--111111-1-1--------|
|-0--0-0--0--000000-0-0--------|
  .  . .  .  ...... . .

Guitar 1:
|-I'll tab the solo later-
|
|Guitar 2: 
|-keep repeating breakdown-

Guitar 1:
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|-0~--8~--5~--10~------------|  x2
|-0~--6~--3~--8-~--0-0-0-0---|
|-0~--6~--3~--8-~--0-0-0-0---|
|                  . . . .
|Guitar 2:
|-----------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------|
|-12b-9h10p9--------12b-9h10p9------|
|------------10/12-------------10\9-|  (start playing on second time and 
|-----------------------------------|       repeat several times)
|-----------------------------------|


|-----------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------|
|-0~--------------0~----------------|  x2
|-0~--00--0-0-0---0~--00--0-0-0-0---|
|-0~--00--0-0-0---0~--00--0-0-0-0---|
      ..  . . .       ..  . . . .

Breakdown:
|------------------------------|
|------------------------------|
|------------------------------|
|------------------------------|  x2
|-0--0-0--0--111111-1-1--------|
|-0--0-0--0--000000-0-0--------|
  .  . .  .  ...... . .



Key:
h-hammer on
p-pull off
b-bend
x-mute
~-let note ring
.-palm mute
'-tremolo pick
*-pinch harmonic
/-slide up
\-slide down