Danny Elfman - Jacks Lament Chords & Tabs

this was done by hand and took me all night and this is my first tab so plz critisize 
this is in 4/4 time and they are all 16th note except for the chord which is a quarter note
ps i did this by translating it from the music book so if you have any nightmare 
pm me
[ Tab from: https://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/d/danny_elfman/jacks_lament_tab.html ]
e---1---1---1---1-|---1---1---------|----------------|
B--2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2|--2-2-2-2--2---2-|----------------|
G-3---2---1---0---|-1---0----3-3-3-3|--0-3-0-0-3-0-3-|
D-----------------|---------4---3---|-2------------5-|
A-----------------|-----------------|-------4------7-|
E-----------------|-----------------|--------------6-|